Shipwrecked...(on a lonely island)
Once there was a girl called Grace and she was a pirate. One day she saw an island, but just as she was approaching the island, her boat scraped on a bit of coral. It took the floorboards off the bottom of the ship. There was a storm and the rest of the ship was ruined. Grace managed to escape in a life boat but the rest of the crew went down with the boat. Grace managed to get to the island.
Grace managed to live on coconuts, fruit and berries that grew on the island. One day she heard bleating outside the hut she had made. Their, standing right in front of her was a nanny goat, a billy goat, and a baby goat. She milked the nanny goat every day and the goats always came back the next day. In return for the milk, she gave the goats fresh water and food.
Grace began to explore the island. She got lots of water from the stream, she found lots more food. Then one day she came to a clearing and there were more goats. She had much more milk and in the end she stayed there forever.
"I love this island" Grace said.
by Aisha
5 comments:
hey aisha, we love your story. i can realy feel what it must be like to be on the desert island. love from mum, Aroha and ariki xxx
Hi Aisha,
I am a school teacher in a Catholic School in NSW and my class 3B had a look at your school's blog and read your story. We thought it was well written, congratulations from 3B.
hi nice story.
are you able to do a picture and post it?
hey Aisha
that is a great story you wrote...
when i was reading it i felt how it must of been like....
WELL DONE IT IS A GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story aisha maybe you could be a writer!PS.i am in your class (3/4B)
cya
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