THE HOPKEYWAT
“OKAY get out your spelling sheets” announced Mrs Bettison. Thanks to Madeline we get to do a 300 word test on Wednesday…TODAY!
I was in great despair that she would change her mind (Mrs B hadn’t got a very good relationship with the class yet,) then Leah had an idea.
“I have a suggestion” she mumbled. Leah was very cowardly!
"Well?”
Bang!!
She was lying on the floor gasping. A weird feeling came over all of us. Our health suddenly went down hill. It was such a tragedy. A strange illness called the “Hopkeywat” was attacking our class.
“Help” screamed someone.
“There is no hope” cried another.
Every one was in great pain. Then Koby with his devotion to the class gained up his courage and stupidly started whacking the air thinking he was beating up the Hopkeywat illness(more people had gone mad by then).
Then “Bella” from 5/6P ran in and jumped up on the table and yelled “WE WILL SURVIVE.... gasp” and fell on the floor.
“1 down 235 to go” said Zac.
SMASH! “2 down 234 to go”
Wack ! 233.
Bang! 232.
Mummy! 231 etc. Every body died
THE END!!
Just kidding. We hadn’t noticed that Mrs B. was gone, but just then she came back in…………WITH 50 HAIR DRYERS. Everyone looked at her in wonder then Sam broke the silence. "Wow she has such beauty I love her "(yep EVERYONE was mad).
Mrs B called the hospital and every one else grabbed a hair dryer and blew the Hopkeywat away and it didn’t bother us again.
THE END!!………
WEEEOORR WEEEOORRR 15 ambulances were going down the road towards Durumble School.
Oops! I think we blew the Hopkeywat too far heh heh heh .
Now this time it really is the end.
by Heddy
4 comments:
Students were asked to write a short story using at least five abstract nouns from their spelling list. Heddy's story was chosen because it received the greatest reaction from the class and because I was mentioned.
Very Good heddy. Well done.
dear Heddy
that is a great story you wrote it was exciting, funny and extraordinary.........
that is a great story it must of tooken you ages and ages to write i could have never thought of that, well maybe but it would have taken me weeks...Once again well done on a great story!!!!!
hey heddy this story is great it really makes me laugh
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